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Amanda Shofner
Grand Mistress of On a Book Bender. On the path of least revision. Wine supplier for grammar pain sufferers. #BecauseWine. Idea wrangler. Wielder of words. Black coffee drinker.
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Amaryllis
Rampant
Bad Behavior
The False Prince
Light of the Moon (Legend of the Dreamer, Book 1)
Amaryllis (St. Helen's Series #1)
Menage A Tasia (Alien Affairs, Book Three)
A few things that had me skimming: There was an excessive use of adverbs. The narrative often involved telling us how the characters felt, which made the reactions and emotions of the characters unreal and difficult to connect with. And no DP. Sad day. If I hadn't been reading this with some friends, I would have put it down and left it unfinished.
 - Kate Hill)